Line Out - V2 Tight Roughs!

So I had a few people ask to see the tight roughs I've been working on for the second set of the Line Out comic that I'm doing for my Visual Storytelling 2 class.

Well, here they are!

I wanted to leave these much looser that my last set as I felt they ended up becoming a little devoid of life there at the end. Sometimes too tight and you lose all the energy.

These are drastically different from the first set, although the overall story is the same.